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Re: Wheatley | Portal 2 | Was Reserved

[personal profile] thatlittlemoron 2015-04-01 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Samples
First Person Sample: [The feed comes on, but of course…it doesn’t appear to be intentional. A pink paw comes onto the screen, tapping it rather slowly. A voice is heard.]

Hey, hye, you knock it off! Whatever…you are…. What even are you mate…come on? What kind of get up is that, being pink and slow….

[He sighs and moves to pick up the Gear, but struggles a bit as he tries to grasp the device. He continually picks it up for a few moments before he drops it again.]

Oh shit! Snap! Stupid human fingers! Who’s bloody idea was to turn me into a human. Magic doesn’t exist and I sure aren’t in Apeture Labs…. Darn it! Come on!

[With much struggle he finally succeeds and stares back at the camera for a while before turning to look at his slowpoke]
No. Don’t think that way, here you are calling me names when you can’t even do a damn thing yourself.

And just to get something straight. I’m not a moron and I know you weren’t just thinking it, because wouldn’t that be calling the kettle black. Not that I am the kettle…or a black kettle or a pot. Right! The pot calling the kettle black! That is not happening right now.

[Plop and the Gear falls from his fingers again.]

Damn! Stupid humans! Stupid human fingers! What is going on!

[A pause.]

No! I don’t need you to comment on that! [Wait was he actually talking to the pokemon. Thinking that it would respond? Odd.]

Third Person Sample: Ouch! He tripped again and again and yep AGAIN! Man he hated this and again what was going on! No one seemed to know and it caused him nothing but frustrations.

Here he was in some foreign land and forced to inhabit a human body. He bumbled around the house, his ‘mother’ calling out sounds of concern as he tripped over his own feet. “I’m fine…mother?” Mother…okay no. “Can you tell me what’s going on here or are you going to respond with some answer that we both know I’m not going to be able to use. Maybe I’ll understand it, I can hope!” He calls from the other room, waiting for some sort of response.

“Have a good journey honey!” she calls back and he just shakes his head. “No! Okay well thank you for the response, but what journey and OW!” he falls again. Man being a human was rough, how did Chell do it? How did any smelly human do it? It certainly was a step down was super smart and over powered AI, but after what he did with his power he guessed this was a fitting punishment. At least he was no longer bopping around in space with that…other core. Funny, how he could find himself missing space core in his current situation.

After a while he makes it out the door, with the pink blob of a pokemon following closely behind him. Wheatley stops and looks back at the monster. He isn’t quite sure what to think of it, it’s not threatening and not to be feared is his conclusion. It seems just as confused as he is and while it has mastered the art of being whatever it is…he still have a bit of a ways to go.
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Revisions

[personal profile] beanie_plant 2015-04-09 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
Though Wheatley was made to be an idiot, he’s still an A.I. with the potential to develop. Unfortunately, when a man-made idiot is left to develop, he tends to only build on his already existing traits. These include ignorance, bad decision-making, and lack of practical knowledge. Wheatley doesn’t know he’s an idiot - he’s spent years without input from anything besides other computers who care more about their own programs. As far as Wheatley’s concerned at the beginning of the game, he’s no different from them. And he isn’t lacking in ego, seeing himself as above having to care of the ‘smelly humans’.

Chell seems to affect him the most. He seems eager to help and please, and his discriminatory take on humans turns a little more patronizing, with strange sympathy towards her ‘brain damage’ and helping her escape Glados. He’s also, however, quick to turn on her when he’s installed in Glados’ body. Granted, some of this is affected by the paranoia that Glados’ programming gives him. But it’s also just as affected by a gnawing awareness that people look down on him, and going mad with the power to do something about it. Like slamming them forcefully into an elevator shaft.

Glados affects him in the way of fear. He always feared her, especially so when his first encounter with her in the game ends in him being squashed like a bug and cast aside. Glados’ nasty habit of getting under people’s skin turns on her when she does it too well, manipulating not only Wheatley’s fear of her, but also of his fear of being seen as less than.

This is one thing he is aware of - inferiority. He knows at least that he has a place below most others, though he may not understand why he’s deserving. He prefers underhanded techniques that get him what he wants in the end. Being direct gets him in trouble, especially when the place is run by a domineering maniace. When he’s given the chance to do the same, though, he takes full advantage. The only problem is that, well, he’s still an idiot. That’s not changed. the only thing different is his confidence levels. He’s given the power to actually FULFILL all these stupid, selfish desires.

And they are selfish. He doesn’t want to be bound to taking care of stupid humans. He doesn’t want the other bots to tell him what to do, which way to go, or how to properly run his job, even if they do know how to better than him. When he’s given power, his bad decisions may seem justified by his bad programming, but he’s also fully aware that their results aren’t okay. But he cares more that he gets what he wants. In the end, it’s INCREDIBLY obvious that he was aware that what he wasn’t doing was okay, when he claims that if he could go back, he’d apologize to Chell. But it’s important to note that he only has the presence of mind to express regret only after it stops being beneficial to him.
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[personal profile] thatlittlemoron 2015-04-10 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
Here I am!!