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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote2010-04-27 11:40 pm
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Understand the secrets and have some fun

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First person re-write

[personal profile] hawksandbullets 2013-07-10 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
Note: Riza's not exactly the talkative type, but this is what I've come up with. I hope it works in getting her voice and character across more.

First Person Sample: Video:
[The feed opens up to Riza, but the view is unsteady. She’s frowning at the devise, unaware that she’s broadcasting. The technology she’s used to isn’t exactly up to par with the kind she has to deal with now. A Pidgey can be seen on her shoulder, though the view quickly changes to show the ground. Riza’s walking somewhere.]

I guess there’s no point in trying to call anyone. Not if everyone’s like the rest of the people in that town.

[She huffs in frustration and continues walking. The Pidgey chirps a bit, but for a while, everything’s pretty uneventful. At least, until Riza comes to a large clump of tall grass. She sudden;y stops as she meets up with a mean little Rattata. She tries to walk around it, but it keeps stepping in front of her. She reaches to where she would normally keep a pistol on her, but grabs nothing. That’s right, they’re gone…]

Do you want to get hurt?

[Riza tries to step over it, but the purple rat just jumps up and grabs on to her leg and sinks its teeth into her leg. Riza cries out and reaches down to grab its tail to throw it off of her. Meanwhile, her Pidgey flies off her shoulder and confronts the Rattata.]

Damnit! [Riza had read the pamphlets, but the whole thing seemed more than a little cruel to her. Still, her bird seemed ready to fight that thing of its own free will…

Riza brings the Pokégear back up, still unaware of the recording as she tries to find that thing where it listed names of attacks.]


Use Sand-attack!

[The Pidgey obeys, though it can’t be seen on the screen. It’s focused on Riza’s face, though everything can still be heard.]

Now tackle it. Good job!

[It isn’t long until Riza lets out an exasperated sigh and the Pidgey returns triumphant. As Riza takes a seat, she sets the Pokégear on the ground where it shows Riza’s bleeding leg. She digs in her bag to find an extra shirt which she rips to bandage herself up. The Pidgey is on the ground next to her looking a little concerned.]

Don’t worry about me. I’ll be fine.

[She strokes the Pidgy’s head and it nuzzles her back.]

You’ll be needing a name, won’t you? How about Kittyhawk?

[A happy chirp. The Pidgey’s just happy that she’s getting a name.]

Kittyhawk it is then.

[Riza’s able to get up and she picks up the Pokégear, now realizing that a little light is on. Kittyhawk returns to her perch on Riza’s shoulder.]

What’s this-

[The feed cuts as Riza hits a button.]
hawksandbullets: (Girl and her dog)

[personal profile] hawksandbullets 2013-07-20 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Here's Riza's journal. Sorry for the delay in responding!