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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote 2015-04-05 11:20 pm (UTC)

Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Wheatley. We feel the current section presents a somewhat superficial look into Wheatley's character, touching largely on surface impressions while leaving out several fundamental aspects of his character. We also feel that the section does not adequately explore how Wheatley's actions and motives develop over the course of the canon, particularly with regards to the other characters he interacts with. In the revised section, please spend more time covering the entirety of Wheatley's character, with special attention paid to his interactions with other characters in the canon and his motives towards them. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.

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