Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Fraser. We feel that the current personality section is a good start, presenting a series of traits that Fraser displays; in the revised sample, we would like to see more analysis of how those traits come together and interweave to create a multifaceted, in-depth character. In doing so, we would also ask that canon references be elaborated on where necessary to make the discussion of Fraser's personality accessible even to a reader that is not canon-familiar.

Also, you have provided us with the wrong application password. Before we can process your application, we will have to ask that you provide us with the correct set of application passwords! You can find these passwords on our Rules and F.A.Q. pages, which we ask all applicants to read and familiarize themselves with before submitting an application.

You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.