Unfortunately, we cannot accept your application at this time. The personality section provided relies too heavily on events without going into any actual analysis of the personality, nor does it detail how the character interacts with and behaves towards other people; the weaknesses listed don’t seem like weaknesses and should be further explained in how they can hinder him; and finally, the third person sample doesn’t appear to show Reeve in Route’s setting – the setting appears to almost be incidental and we would prefer to see a clearer reaction towards or introspection regarding the new world. Feel free to reapply as many times as you’d like.