Unfortunately, we can’t accept your application at this time. The personality section is lacking as it only discusses one or two of Apple Bloom’s traits and forgets many other aspects of her character. In addition, the strengths/weaknesses aren’t clearly articulated and are things that should be covered in the personality as well. The first person sample is too generic and doesn’t show her voice very clearly – should you reapply, you might want to consider putting her in a different situation to better make her personality show. Feel free to reapply as many times as you’d like.