Before we make a final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality and strengths/weaknesses section. What you have given us in terms of personality deals too heavily with history and an explanation of the world, while we are much more interested in seeing a more thorough and expanded description of Fang as a character and an exploration of her behavior. As for strengths and weaknesses, we feel that they could be further detailed and explained. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.