Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section, as the one provided only seems to cover some aspects of her personality. While it touches on her sympathy and her rough attitude, but it doesn't explain her motive for being a medical-nin or even her wish to think of people as people rather than war tools, or some of the other aspects of her personality that she doesn't show on the surface. We'd like an elaboration that includes more of her key points and describes her more personal or hidden side. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.