Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like revised personality and strengths/weaknesses sections for Epsilon. We feel that the personality section is somewhat scattered and relies too heavily on defining Epsilon's personality traits through contrasting him with other characters, rather than explaining and elaborating on the things that make him a distinct three-dimensional character in his own right. In the revised section, we would prefer to see more focus on who Epsilon is and how he behaves in and of himself, as well as his motivations for doing so.

We would also like a revised strengths/weaknesses section for Epsilon. We feel the strengths section in particular includes several traits that are not applicable to gameplay in Route, as due to our humanizing rules Epsilon will not be an A.I. while in the Route setting. In the revised section, please flesh out Epsilon with a variety of strengths and weaknesses of both character and skill that are relevant to gameplay that will take place in Route's setting.

You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.