Unfortunately, we can't accept your application at this time. On the whole, we felt the application seemed rushed in places, and did not present to us a clear and cohesive look at who Karma is as a three-dimensional character in his own right. The personality section is very short, focused more on citing traits in isolation rather than demonstrating how these traits all come together in Karma as a person, and lacks support for those traits by failing to back them up with canon examples. We likewise feel that the strengths/weaknesses section is overly simplistic, and in one place even appears to be left incomplete. Finally, we found certain factual inconsistencies in this application that do not reflect an accurate portrayal of the game's setting as it stands. For these reasons, we cannot accept your application at this time. Please feel free to reapply as many times as you like.
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