Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Duster. Though the current section does a thorough job at outlining Duster's traits, we feel that the current section places a large emphasis on reciting his behaviors, without delving deeper into exploring how those behaviors may have shaped him as a person. In the revised section, we would like to see more discussion and analysis of how his canon experiences have made Duster who he is, with references to canon events as you see fit to help illustrate who he is as a well-rounded character in his own right. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.