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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote 2015-06-23 02:13 am (UTC)

Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Edea. We feel the section as it currently stands is somewhat superficial and focuses heavily on very few of Edea's traits, where we would prefer to see a broader and more in-depth look at the many qualities that make her a well-rounded character in her own right. In the revised section, please focus on presenting a clear and comprehensive look at who Edea is as a multifaceted character in her own right, with analysis of how her experiences have shaped her traits, behaviors, and perspectives. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.

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