Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised strengths/weaknesses section and a new first-person sample for Eric. We feel that the strengths/weaknesses section is somewhat short, and we would prefer to see strengths of both skill and character that will be applicable to Route's setting. In the revised section, please expand on the section as a whole, elaborating on the strengths and weaknesses of both character and skill that make Eric a multifaceted character in his own right.

We would also like a revised first-person sample for Eric. We feel that the current sample as it stands is somewhat generic, and would prefer to see a sample that more thoroughly demonstrates the traits discussed in the other sections of the application. When completing the revised sample, please feel free to put Eric in whatever game-relevant circumstances you feel would best allow you to demonstrate these traits.

You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.