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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote 2015-05-17 08:04 pm (UTC)

Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Lapis. We feel that the current section relies too heavily on citing canon events without sufficiently demonstrating how those events show aspects of Lapis's personality in a clear and concise way. Rather than placing the emphasis on the things Lapis has done and attempting to rationalize them through aspects of her personality, we would prefer the revised section to place the focus on detailing and analyzing the concrete traits of Lapis's personality, with canon references cited where relevant to showcase those traits. In the revised section, please present a clear and concise look at who Lapis is as a person, citing to canon as a means of illustrating and discussing how her experiences have shaped her as a character. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.

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