Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section and first-person sample for Serah. We feel that, while the current section thoroughly covers Serah's more positive traits, her negative ones are somewhat glossed-over; thus, we feel the section as a whole would benefit from further expansion and in-depth analysis of the flaws that make her a unique character in her own right.

We also feel that the first-person sample is generic, and would prefer a sample that more clearly demonstrates who Serah is as a distinct and identifiable character. In the revised sample, please feel free to tailor the scenario as you see fit to show off Serah's unique traits as a person. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.