Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section and a new first-person sample for Hughes. We feel the personality section as submitted is sparse and requires more careful thought and in-depth analysis of the many facets of Hughes's character. We also feel that the first-person sample is superficial; in the revised first-person sample, we would like to see more display of Hughes's nature as a character, as opposed to one trait exaggerated to the point of being a gimmick. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.