Unfortunately, we can't accept your application at this time. In our revisions request, we asked for an examination of specific traits that present a clear and thorough picture of Xion's personality. However, we feel that the revisions provided read more like a history section than a revised personality, with too much focus paid to the recitation of canon events, and the analysis of Xion's character traits occurring only tangentially. For these reasons, we cannot accept your application at this time. Please feel free to reapply as many times as you like.