Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like to request that you provide us with a revised personality section. While the current section is fine in terms of the aspects of Jane that it covers, we feel it has not adequately covered the aspects of Jane's development up to your canonpoint of choice. In the revised section, please expand upon Jane's personality with regard to how she has changed over the course of canon, from the time when she was introduced up to your canonpoint of choice. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.