Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like to request that you provide us with a revised strengths/weaknesses section. The weaknesses you have provided are not really weaknesses, and we would have preferred to see a section more akin to the "good personality traits and negative ones" you provided at the end of your personality section. In the revised section, please examine some of these traits as well, and elaborate on how they affect Jake's character as a whole. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.