Unfortunately, we can't accept your application at this time. While we did ask for more elaboration on the situations mentioned in your previous personality section, we also specified that the elaboration should be done to give us a better idea of Aelita's personality in general. Instead, the new section provided reads more like a history section, with not enough focus on how Aelita's personality traits are influenced by the canon occurrences detailed. Should you choose to apply again, we suggest first isolating Aelita's key personality traits and structuring this section around describing them, with canon examples cited and described in support of how those traits are manifested. Feel free to reapply as many times as you like.