As our application form indicates, the first-person sample must come in the form of a network broadcast post, and is used both to demonstrate a character's voice and to give a glimpse of how a character will communicate with others over the PokéConnect network system. The scenario and content displayed in the sample are subject to the applicant's discretion, so long as it takes place in the setting of Route_29. However, the sample must be in broadcast format, as though a character is posting to the network in some capacity. It does not have to be video specifically; text or audio are also acceptable, but it must be in the style of the character themselves posting.

In the personality traits section, we asked for a revised section addressing certain inconsistencies we saw in the initial submission. Following a side-by-side analysis of the old and new sections, it appeared that you changed only one sentence before resubmitting a virtually identical section, when we expected a new and freshly-written submission focusing on analyzing the specific problems we'd pointed out.

As you redo your application, we suggest taking our previous remarks into consideration, as those were the problems we specifically noted the first time around. We hope to see you back soon!