Unfortunately, we can't accept your application at this time. The revised personality sample provided is virtually identical to the original with minor and superficial changes to wording, rather than a fresh supplemental analysis of the concerns we pointed out in our original revision request. Also, the revised weaknesses are still his strengths in excess, when we asked for examples of other weaknesses aside from that variety. Therefore, we cannot accept your application revisions. Feel free to reapply as many times as you like.