Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section. While the decision to seal Genocider Syo for the purposes of Route gameplay is entirely within your discretion, we would still like to see more analysis of how her existence has affected Fukawa's personality and defined her as a character, as well as some coverage of Syo's individual personality as well. On a related note, we would also appreciate some clarification on why Fukawa has chosen to name her starter after Syo - while we are in no way attempting to police what characters choose to name their starters, Fukawa's stated tendency to conceal Genocider Syo from the people around her seems at odds with the action of naming her starter after Syo, and we would like to hear your rationale for this choice. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.
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