Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like revised personality and strength/weaknesses sections. The personality section is too short and only covers a single aspect of Larxene's character, when we would like to see an analysis of the variety of traits that make her an individual. The strengths and weaknesses likewise need more elaboration on aspects of Larxene's character that are not her lack of capacity to feel emotion and her sadism in carrying out her actions. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.