Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like revised personality and strength/weaknesses sections. The personality section relies too much on reciting Nitori's history rather than analyzing her character traits and the reasons behind them; in the revised section, we would like to see a more thorough look at how her traits define her and make her who she is as a character. Also, we would like to see more weaknesses that are relevant to Route's setting in particular; not being good at magic, for example, is not a weakness in a setting where no characters can utilize magic in the first place. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.