Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality and strengths/weaknesses section for Visas. The personality section is too short and we would like to see more analysis of how the listed traits make Visas the person she is, rather than simply as statements of her qualities. We would also like to see a more thorough list of Visas's strengths and weaknesses, and more fleshed-out descriptions/explanations for how they help/hinder the character and how they will come into play in the setting. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.