Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality and strengths/weaknesses section. The personality section focuses much too heavily on the character’s history and powers, both of which are okay to include to further an analysis of the character’s traits and personality, but here little analysis and reflection is presented. In addition, the strengths/weaknesses contradict each other (for example, he keeps his temper in check but has an issue with temper?) and should be further explained when it comes to how they will fit the setting. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.