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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote 2013-05-06 04:09 am (UTC)

PENDING

Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section, as the one provided comes off as very weak. As she's coming from post ending, it feels as though most of the personality description in the section provided doesn't go into much detail on her growth or development as a character. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.

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