Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality and strengths/weaknesses sections. The personality seems short and not very thorough, and could stand to be more in-depth – in particular there’s no analysis on how Elena interacts with and behaves towards others. Also, the weaknesses in particular don’t seem much like weaknesses and we would like to see a further analysis of how these traits are weaknesses to the character. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.