Unfortunately, we are unable to accept your application at this time. While the revised personality does better explain what you were trying to say previously, it's still altogether lacking; the personality appears to be shallow and while it does touch on several aspects of Aelita it doesn't expand on any of them, making it difficult to get a good understanding of the character.

The new sample is lacking in a similar way, showing her dialogue but very little of her internal thought process, reasoning and emotional responses.

Feel free to reapply as many times as you'd like.