Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section and third person sample. The personality section isn’t focused very clearly on Aelita herself and instead explains a lot of people’s relationships to her; this is fine as long as it’s used to further the analysis of her own personality but shouldn’t take up the majority of the section. We would altogether like to see a cleaner and more in-depth version. As for the third person sample, it doesn’t meet the 300 word count requirement and should showcase more introspection. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.