Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section and strengths/weaknesses section. The personality reads more like a collection of traits than a coherent personality and seems short and fairly lacking; we would like to see more of a description on what the character’s goals and motivations are as well as how she interacts with other people. As for strengths and weaknesses, we’d like to see them elaborated on in regards to how they might help and hinder her in the setting. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.