Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality sample, as Sayaka's uses too much history to explain the canon details as opposed to explaining how they impact her personality. You may leave in the history so long as it's used in terms of examples of how or why her personality is as it is. We would also like to see a better explanation on her interactions with others, as it was brushed upon but not fully detailed in the section. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.