Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality sample and a revised first person sample. The personality sample provided tackles his personality more in terms of his history with personality included instead of a description or explanation of how he is at his present canon point. We would also like to see less descriptions of how he interacts with other characters from his canon and more about him by himself. While adding influence from canonmates is not looked down upon, when used to excess, it detracts from the description of Jason himself. The first person sample also seems far too generic and doesn't clearly express Jason's personality. You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.