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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote 2012-09-16 05:12 am (UTC)

Unfortunately, we cannot accept your application at this time, as it lacks the Strengths/Weakness section and is thus incomplete. We also noticed certain weak points in the personality section which we felt would be best to bring to your attention in the case that you wished to re-apply. Firstly, it describes Sayori’s worries but doesn’t discuss where this worry might come from or many other aspects of her personality, such as her behavior and motivations. Secondly, we'd like to see more in the way of self-perception, or maybe insecurities if she has them. You're welcome to reapply as many times as you like.

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