Unfortunately, we cannot accept your application at this time. We felt that the personality section did not focus on enough of her canon traits that are shown in game—namely, what you learn about her through her Shadow arc and social link. Furthermore, the way her voice and attitude is portrayed through her samples seemed off; there was more attention drawn to her negativity than to her more prevalent optimistic behavior. There were also some points that were off here as well, such as her knowing Naoto as "she" despite that, given the canon point you listed, Rise would not have known that yet. In general it seems that the application was focused on the wrong areas and could use general restructuring. Please feel free to reapply as many times as you like.